Kia ora, I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms. Aireen & Ms. Komor.
Hello Teresa, It is good to see that you are a keen blogger. As a young learner your enthusiasm is awesome. This is a good start and you have understood the setting and characters in narrative structure. The other parts of narrative structure are more complex and you will begin to see these appear more when you read. Like the story 'Helpful.' What was the problem? What was the action taken? and What was the consequence?
Hello Teresa, It is good to see that you are a keen blogger. As a young learner your enthusiasm is awesome. This is a good start and you have understood the setting and characters in narrative structure. The other parts of narrative structure are more complex and you will begin to see these appear more when you read. Like the story 'Helpful.' What was the problem? What was the action taken? and What was the consequence?
ReplyDeletep.s Thank you for editing my Matariki work :)
Nga mhi nui,
Miss Ikiua